Free Copy Critique of

As part of my marketing masterplan, I run the website, providing free 5-ish minute copy critiques of small business websites in exchange for the ability to use them for my own shameless self promotion. As a part of my new website overhaul, I've decided to start publishing them here on a probably-but-not-necessarily once a week basis.

The first in the series is a critique that I did awhile back for a web designer named Adam for his website Take a look:

To get your own free copy critique, go to